Reviews for All Alone
Umi chapter 1 . 9/25/2003
Just so happens to be that time of a 3 day weekend night where I have nothing to do but surf the web, and I stumble again onto your cluster of poems.

This one has great imagery. I can almost remember a time in my life when I could imagine myself doing this; it was exactly the same as it was in the poem. I don't know how the hell you managed to pull that memory out of my mind, but, after all, you are the omniscient Ice Hawk.

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Insane Freak Always,

Umi.

P.S. I'll beat you next time!
Rhetorics chapter 1 . 5/30/2003
hmm... wow, i like the imagery. Sort of a spontaneous feeling... but that's how most poems are written anyway. Good job. It's so... flowy... I have to learn from you lol.
Inconceivable chapter 1 . 2/22/2003
the melancholy mood fits perfectly.
Cindy Moon chapter 1 . 12/17/2002
The azul sky that reflects upon the waters

Crash upon the shores.

The clouds fall upon the jaggeds rocks that lie below.

The sun no longer exists

And still I read your dang good poetry wishing i can amount up to your talent!

Well how has it been for you?

I see your writing has been improving

great stuff you have...

me waiting for that X-mas gift... come to think of it yours will be published soon enough

tahtah for nows