I love it. The extent of detail is appealing to the reader. The whole thing is extremely well written. Please add more.

This is getting really good. I can't wait to see where this goes. I hope you keep writing.

This whole story has been pretty good so far! I hope you will get around to writing more, you know... Seems like, SOMEthing is around the corner... _ I just hope its what I'm thinking... And well... with my mind, things can go strangely... Oh well.

~Faile "May that shining light shone brightly through the ever closing darkness."

that was fabulous; i love the attention to detail. anticipate more in the future.

rock on

I already love the great attention to detail you have meade when describing Summer. I can really get the feeling that the narrator possesses an extreme amount of reverance for her, and that of course will lead to more interesting developments later, whatever they may be. I really urge you to write more.

i like this but please write more