Reviews for THE DEFINATION OF LIFE
Star of the Sea chapter 1 . 11/24/2002
I liked it, but the ending was left a bit hanging...like I feel like there was more to say. You have a very nice style and a common thread among the poems of yours that I have read.

(note: you may want to double check grammar on your submissions. little mistakes have a tendency to draw away from what you are saying.)

Keep up the good work!