|Reviews for Freedom|
| Demon Donatello chapter 1 . 6/2/2004
Very well written... Good job, very well depicted. ... And here is my horrid spelling yet again...
| Yaa chapter 1 . 4/28/2004
Really good, nice work.
| Jrtgem chapter 1 . 4/15/2004
I really love your poem, and wish to use it on a personal piccy of mine...may I?
| Cyanotok chapter 1 . 8/8/2003
Interesting, but nothing overwhelming. The line "sails, billowing... Like pigtails"... pigtails just doesn't belong there for some reason, at least not to me. I think it's because I think of a little girl, and little girls/sailor slaves don't go together for me. Have fun!
| Akemi-Luv chapter 1 . 7/12/2003
I love it. It's so pretty. Great Work!
| rosepetal1077 chapter 1 . 6/17/2003
slavery is one of the most disgraceful pathetic practices on this planet! your imagery was lovely.
| Ritina chapter 1 . 11/26/2002
... so deep!
| Kyle Gon Jinn chapter 1 . 9/16/2001
I really like this one Cass.
| Aphra chapter 1 . 2/6/2001
Hey I like it. I can't believe no one else reviewed this!