Reviews for Millenium
6549875654987 chapter 1 . 3/12/2004
wow! your imagery is awsome! i hope you make this into a story. it would be incredible with the virgin as the protagonist or told from her point of view. great work!
anonymous19 chapter 1 . 1/22/2003
heyyy, this is the person whom you always say never leaves a this phantom has decided to sit down and spill it out.

hurry up and get started with the story already...

if you leave it hanging as a "poem" wasted...
Shadow King Stan chapter 1 . 11/26/2002

this okay, but it needs somework.

And you mix past tense and present tense waaaay to much

Although if you made it a story, I think it'd have potential...