Reviews for Hidden in Darkness
The System Mother chapter 1 . 1/21/2005
Simple but cool. Keep the writing.
LuthienLuin chapter 1 . 7/17/2004
Thanks for reviewing my haiku!
This poem brings a really cool image to mind, and the end is very powerfull.
I couldn't help but notice you're a Stargate fan - me too! Although I'm sad this is probably the last season, I couldn't help but love Atlantis - Sheppherd is great!
-LuthienLuin
DarkAngel202884 chapter 1 . 7/11/2003
This is a nice poem. I like how it ends. _
C. Hoogkamer chapter 1 . 6/29/2003
aww i like it alot! AWESOME!
Werecat99 chapter 1 . 12/10/2002
That was awesome! I liked it a lot.
SweetGrape chapter 1 . 12/10/2002
Capitalising 'Light' and 'Dark' etc almost personifies them and makes it an imagery/metaphorical poem as well.

Very strong and hopeful, even inspiring- especially in the great last 2 lines.

Nice message about courage and trying to make things better even if it's hard, and not giving up and lots of things, really.

Very strong and hope-filled.
not sure yet chapter 1 . 12/1/2002
great job, find it interesting how you captalized Dark, Light, Heart, Hope, Love, Pain, etc., needs a lil puncuation, but other then that, i love it, very well written and says a lot in little!
Stoffpferd chapter 1 . 11/30/2002
Awww, das ist super geschrieben! *seufz* Und wieder ein Reim *lol* *tätschel* Gefällt mir sehr gut!

Das Stoffpferdl
monsterbreaker chapter 1 . 11/27/2002
I like this. There is truely nothing else I can say other than that I like it.

~me~
MysteryDreamer chapter 1 . 11/27/2002
That's really nice. Short with meaning, very good! _