Reviews for Kiranai Hebun Year Three |
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![]() ![]() awesome, i just caught up with this, after like two/three years of not reading(you'd just started year three if i remember right.) so yeah awesome, rocking(nice backstory on mel too, i sorta like her more knowing why she's such a biotch) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Where can I read the first part? It's a little confusing without it. |
![]() ![]() Um... yay for KH? MAKE MORE! And no more Kiei-death. |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOW! MAGGIE! WOW! I'm not sure that there is a whole lot else to say about your writing but wow! please continue with the next bit soon, i believe I shall die if you wait that long again to update! lol jk jk but seriously...PLEASE UPDATE SOON ~Sam~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aloha kouner, I hope all is well with you, being you haven't written on your story in an oddly long time *for your standards anyways* Just thought you might need s'more encouragement to get back into your grove, so C'mon Kouner! Your writing is fantastic keep it up! |
![]() ![]() Helo! dude i just love your stories - they rock V (peace sign) hope you update soon i cant wait until the next chapter is out, anywayz keep it up! |
![]() ![]() Yo o Mina here .. (duh). Glad to have finally gotten myself caught up on this whole shindig. Looks like it's good so far, so.. keep up the good writing work 8D~! And get on AIM sometime soon. :O I have a new name and I miss talking to ye (that and we need to talk in more in general XD;) But yes, keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hm... why does rose want devona to go back to bed so urgently? maybe it's because she weanted to discuss something while devona wasn't there...? good chappie! - ~dragonitelover ps. and happy new year! |
![]() ![]() ![]() rose is such a good friend! geez, i really wish i didn't have to wait to send you your fanart. you'll get prolly mondayish. and yay! akki and devona together again! |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw, yay, great chappie! i'll be waiting anxiously for the next post! ~dragonitelover |
![]() ![]() ![]() ah! no! i just hate cliff-hangers! (especially when it's so literal!) post when yew can! (hopefully, that'll be soon!) keep up the good work. ~dragonitelover |
![]() ![]() ![]() hm... what's the right thing? i'll keep reading... i want to see what happens next! ~dragonitelover |
![]() ![]() Yeay another amazing chapter to your story. I was seriously hoping you would update soon and ta-da here it was today, I cant wait to read the next part ~Sammy~ |
![]() ![]() wah~! so sorry i couldn't review earlier..;; neway, i was pleasantly very happy when kiei came back and i thought i wasn't ever going to see him ever again in this year- *huggles* you the greatest! and one really scary thing.. melanie's spirit dragon is a guy? well, it is better than having a melanie like bitchy woman for a princess.. - neway, i thought every start point person was suppose to be a princess.. aka.. feminine;; but this twist is very likeable!- as i said before having a handsome cute guy as a star point um "warrior" is better than melanie like star point princess- well, good luck on writing your next chappie~!- |
![]() ![]() ![]() ah! melanie's a guy! well, sort of... anywho, great chappie! i'm glad i had time to read it. keep it up! ~dragonitelover |