Reviews for Dom
Just Wolf chapter 1 . 1/28/2004
i've read this before, but it's still beautiful...
you said you wanted to write something diffrent from how you usually write, but maybe you shouldn't. your descriptions are so wonderful the way they are. they are unique and poweerful, and you're amazing for writing them. this story just proves how good your writing is.
anyway, but your a brilliant writer, and it's the way you describe that makes you that.
altho something diffrent is never bad.
always keep writing. (lol)
-rozzy
Just Wolf chapter 4 . 6/16/2003
pain, love, blood. it was incredible, fly-away, fairy tale, spring like, grounded in reality but a gohst story, trying to spring away from my eyes. it was beautiful, incredible, powerful...

i really loved it...
Anna Vashdalal chapter 5 . 12/27/2002
Yes, of course you should continue. But I have no idea where you could take it. Maybe give her something...to get over Zane...
Cryptic Insanity chapter 4 . 12/22/2002
Sad,but I love it.
ziggy pop eno chapter 4 . 12/15/2002
how did i miss this? it's great. So sad, but that's how love seems to be...i know these feelings. Continue, this helps me feel better :}
flying blind chapter 4 . 12/15/2002
Oh my god! This chapter was so emotional. It was great I loved it. You have a very powerful writing style. Please update soon.
Anna Vashdalal chapter 3 . 12/15/2002
Oh, I hadn't read this one. It's good. It's also sad. I think it's probably pretty acurate, considering that's how love is. It spends and it's gone. Sooner or later, you have to pretend that it lasts forever, and get comfortable living with somebody you'll cheat on, or you can get to know yourself better.

I read chapter 4 too, by the way. But I rememebered it from the email.

Are you done with this one, or will you add more?
flying blind chapter 3 . 12/15/2002
wow! thats the only thing that comes to mind, this is great i hope you upload more soon
not-just-any-freak chapter 2 . 12/10/2002
wow thats lovely

:)

really nice one that is, can really feel it.

groovy
Aftertaste of a Razorblade chapter 2 . 12/4/2002
This is good. The chapters are short, but it's very, very good.

PLEASE add more.
flying blind chapter 2 . 12/4/2002
Wow is the first word that comes to mind. I really really like this story i hope you update soon, i can relate to it so it makes the story all the more appealing.
icychick04 chapter 1 . 12/4/2002
This is really good. Submit more. I'd love to read more. So Sumbit soon ok
Cryptic Insanity chapter 2 . 12/3/2002
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW,i love it,add more,add more!
Anna Vashdalal chapter 2 . 11/29/2002
Oi, I love this! Why didn't you tell me that you added a new chapter? I wish this would happen to me. I can elate to everything you write, and it hurts sometimes. Yes, i know i sound stupid. This story is really great. Write more really soon. do you have more of it written, and you're just handing it out pieve by piece? Can I see more? I sent VL. Please?
Anna Vashdalal chapter 1 . 11/28/2002
I read stuff like this and I feel instantly jealous. What i write is mostly wishful thinking dialouge, and nothing more. And I want to get published. It's stories likie this that make me wish I had never found this site.

You should definately keep writing this one. It actually reminds me of someone...

Dalva