|Reviews for Broken Wings|
| Kyaroru Fanel chapter 1 . 10/14/2003
This really hurts...I liked the way you fit in the catchphrase. A few things bugged me...I want to know more about her, but I suppose this is suppose to focus on his death, and her reaction to it, so I guess...
Nice work anyway.
| avrilrox05 chapter 1 . 2/4/2003
so i dont get it did he die?/
newayz dis wuz good but u repeated the same line da begining and da end.
| Angel of DarkWorld chapter 1 . 12/25/2002
I loved it, it was beautiful...*smiles slightly*
| miss meaningeverythingtome chapter 1 . 12/1/2002
it's a bitty pretty.
| Magickal Poetess chapter 1 . 11/30/2002
I already told you what I think of this. 'Tis very beautiful and haunting.
| Alethia chapter 1 . 11/29/2002
Very expressive, very good.
| xurbandecayx chapter 1 . 11/29/2002
Beautiful and serene, even through such a catastrophic time, she remains true to him, true to loving him; even though he is a war victim, leaving her in a painful and distraught predicament being a love lorn women left behind with the ashes and tears of what shouldn't have been. Absolutely overpoweringly intoxicating! Definitley going into the faves daaaaahling!
| drama-princess chapter 1 . 11/29/2002
*shivers* Ooh. . . creepy ending, with just the twist of haunted memory to lend an edge to the story.
| Nita chapter 1 . 11/29/2002
*clears throat* Eh eh ehm!
She never looks back!
Oh, she always looked good dressed in black!
You're so special!
Who gives a-
Do you want to play?
Er...sorry. Diva-esque Jewel moment there. :)
| Anna Vashdalal chapter 1 . 11/28/2002
Wow, if I was you I'd take this one down pronto and start submiting it to magazines and contests. this is really very well written. Much better than the usual teen stuff here.
| lili brik chapter 1 . 11/28/2002
very beautiful descriptions. very powerful-very nice.
| Slacker Demon chapter 1 . 11/28/2002
*applause slowly builds* Yeah Norah...you go lil dancer grrrl!