LOVED IT! you like one a the grestes writers. Can't wait until you update!

hey this is great hope you write more on it

hey love your story please update soon

Wow, I really like this story so far! Alex sounds hot lol Please update soon!
~Ave

I love your story! It's really great, I just wish instead of so much dialogue at times you would have paragraphs dedicated to their thoughts so I can know what they're thinking at times. It's all good though, because I'm still feeling this story. If you still have writers block and have no clue where you're going with this story, I have some thoughts I can email you right now. Hopefully you'll update.

Groovy story. It's a rather cliche and pulled off not as well as it could really be, but still a lot better than many, many others I've read. The thing that also makes it nice is that it's the guy that's really into the girl and not vice versa like in most other stories like this. But then again, it makes me think of that really crappy movie "Whatever It Takes" but this story is a Pulitzer next to that.
Bottom line: Make it evolve. Make the characters grow 'cause right now they seem very static. Also, drop the Christina Aguilera thingy. If you use it, only use part of it. Originality is key on this site.
This is all constructive and I really do hope you finish this cause it's off to a great start.
~*~angelfeather~*~ 'Stay sane inside insanity...' - RHPS

i dont know if your still updating this story. but i hope you are. i haven't read your recent chapters until just now, but i'm loving it! great story line, can't see what else you got planned!

okie dokes! please update soon. i think alex is a cool guy so yeah!

You just gotta update soon! I'm mad sugar high off leftover halloween candy and cannot wait until you update! wow. That rhymes, but neways, gotta luv the humor, the punks, and the flipped out preppy princess best friend-or other best friend. Hehehehehe.

omg, i love this! you have to update SOON!

AH! You know this is so YOU! I love it! and you siad that he wasn't good inspiration! i love this mushy love business! WOOHHO * does a little dance* *Jumps up and down* (notice the J) EWWOHOWPOHO! awsome chica just awsome... keep writing keep writing... oh yeah i added sum thing to my sight too just if you care to check it out its called Friend loved Loveforbidden... but whatever! this is gettin so good! i understand about jemma nice touch.,.,. and your mom? pardon me her mopm woho luv yah! Peace out!

i was so excited to see that you updated... but it was just song lyrics *sobs*. Oh well, I hope you update for real, soon!

yea! pretty similar to a movie I saw once... Drive Me Crazy? or something... but different enough to make it really cool! keep it up!

Its really good love, but just one little thing, spell check can be your friend, only I would noticed stuff I like that though so I think your okay. Again, its really good.

Can't wait for the next chapter.