Reviews for Illusions
aurias chapter 1 . 1/21/2003
Stanza 1,2,3,6 and 7 reflect very well - that people hide beneath their fantasies and dreams.

Stanza 4 and 5 are somewhat cute!

Stanza 8 to 12 seem to work as a wake-up call to people, telling them to wake and get on with their lives.

Overall effect of the poem is good. The message I get is - people immersed themselves into fantasies and then had to survive the rude reality. Wonder if that's what you intended! Good work.
Priestess Michiko chapter 1 . 11/29/2002
Hi, I loved this poem. It feels so true. our poetry is good, have you written/going to write anymore? I hope so.