Reviews for matt in his black sweater
SlateAP chapter 1 . 12/9/2002
Great job. I can't pretend I didn't get all of it though. Define "diktat" for me, I couldn't figure it out from context. Beyond that however, this poem was great. Can't wait to read more of your stuff.
Kievsky chapter 1 . 12/7/2002
Wonderful, beautiful, a perfect yearning. The colors and imagery are like a horizon line, both the end of one day and the continuation of time and emotion.

You have such cascading style in your poetry.
kealohikakahiaka chapter 1 . 12/2/2002
Aww... That's so sweet, I love your syntax and diction.
Curtis J. Perry chapter 1 . 12/2/2002
I love the use of color theming in this poem. When you press on your skin, turning it white. Like figting fire with fire. Rather, fire with light :P.
Aviendha19 chapter 1 . 12/1/2002
i love this poem. its so sharp and sheer, like a breath in the cold. its so truth! there are so many sheer beautiful lines, the bits of red rocks, and walking home. ah.
Becky Cookie chapter 1 . 11/30/2002
very interesting
grrrandpa chapter 1 . 11/30/2002
That was one of most interesting poems I've ever read. You have a wonderful style, I shall go read more of your work. And thanks for reviewin' my country song!