Reviews for Slipping Away
PaganScribe chapter 1 . 7/26/2004
good haiku
AngelaiR chapter 1 . 3/17/2004
you win the award for the shortest poem;)
Emi Amara chapter 1 . 11/27/2003
Hiya! This should go under haiku, because including the title it's a haiku! Very good, powerful in some ways and not in others! Well done!

Cya )

*WG
Gir Garcia chapter 1 . 9/7/2003
wow! that's extreamly short! u know...who isn't krazy these days don't feel alone...'cause ur not. nice poem
tommygirl6626 chapter 1 . 7/24/2003
Every now and then, I feel the same. you're not alone.
Rose Dark Thorn chapter 1 . 6/14/2003
I wonder too.
az2328 chapter 1 . 6/2/2003
eh.. we're all crazy.
Kyalia chapter 1 . 6/1/2003
Nobody believes crazy people when they say they're going crazy...
nimue webweaver chapter 1 . 3/21/2003
short, but very very nicely done, and i feel the same way sometimes
John Ink chapter 1 . 3/8/2003
Your discription was probably longer than your poem! Oh well. I believe you!
Zainab chapter 1 . 2/17/2003
This is good.
Harmony Artisan chapter 1 . 12/19/2002
I know the feeling... *sigh*

good one D
soyamiso chapter 1 . 12/3/2002
Been there. And no, they never believe.

Good one.
DiamondTopaz chapter 1 . 12/2/2002
Arg! Short! More!

Although...do you like Invader Zim? This haiku would be good in that section. It describes just about all of the characters to a T. (Metaphorically speaking, of course.)