god start

Jarell (aka J-Boog) is da hawtest guy from B2K. so sad B2K broke up *cries* Ok I'm done. me likey ur story.~Blu

this is a cute story. PLEASE finish it.

m .. write more!

UPDATE! ...lol n dat's all i gotta say bout dat...

very good very good ya nc-17 definitely ... but still great writing skills

Damn girl, you can write. That was hot. Are you gonna finish this story?

You got mad talent. Have you thought a bout becoming a writer. If you haven't you should. Cause your stuff is better than most profecionals.

Whens the next chapter coming. I bet it's going to be off the hook.

Thinker

I think you have gotten off to a great start with your story. I think as you progress your story will become more and more interesting. Keep going.

Lots of luck,

Thinker

Yo this is Razcandi! This my girl ya'll...her shyt gonna be hot. I know this...ya'll give her props though cuz this her first story and it's better than anything I've ever written *lol* well I'ma be writing soon..(improved now :)) So ya got some work girl! Keep it hot like always much love and thanxs 4 the shout out..Razcandi 1

It pretty good so far. Can't wait for morw

alright, explanation? Why is the second chapter the same as the first? Is my computer just messing it up? Or did you just do this on purpose? If so that is evil. What is going to happen? You've got me intrigued now. I've been busy lately and haven't been reading that much as I used to, but now you've got me very intrigued. Come on, what's going to happen?

If you do this posting the chapter twice again I swear I'll scream. It's not fair! *cries* what happens?

Cat

i like this so far it's really good.

OMG GIRL YOU R A TYTE WRITER. YOU MAKE THIS AUTHOR HERE CHECK HER WORK...YOU ASID YOU WERENT A GOOD WRITER BUT, SHYT GIRL YOU KILLING ME! WELL, NOW I GOT TO CAUGHT UP TO YOU...GOT ME RE-WRITING MY SHIT TRYING TO SOUND MATURE. LOL...WELL KEEP UP THE EXCELLENT WORK! YOUR THE GREATEST WRITER I'VE MET!

This story is really updating