This was great! Really, I can't wait until you update (soon, right?)

I love the way you're developing her character, it's extremely believable. I also like you're technique of using hindsight, i really want to know what comes next, and how she evolves into self-desctruction. Keep writing!

This is off to a really good start, I'm extremely interested, keep posting!

Oi, but when what started? please update soon. this is really really good. It's sad though. Stupid girls. mean little camper bitches.