not a very good one? ARE YOU PSYCHO? that was so, so, so incredibly wonderful and sad...it reminded me some of my grandfather, and you have no idea how much that that poem meant to me. Thank you, people like you add beauty to the world.

What an incredibly beautiful picture you painted!

WOW! This is very very VERY good! Whoo...I said it three times...; But, really, it's lovely (I use that word waaaaay too much in my reviews). And you call it an *attempt* at a ballad? I'd give it six stars! Keep up the good work!

A brilliant attempt at a ballad. I am -so- tempted to add music.