Reviews for The Many Things Before Me
WandererofHope chapter 1 . 8/1/2005
Hmm, if I read more of your poems, maybe I can see what's holding you back. I think my outlook on this poem is way different from the other 2 reviewers. I didn't really care about the last word, which was "YOU." Mainly because I took it the wrong way I guess. Gah, I'm sure there's not a demon holding you back because you mentioned your shadow, which surprised me. Awkward-but I'm enticed. I'll be thinking about this for a while. Nicely written.
Needa S chapter 1 . 12/2/2002
I like the way you summed this up. I wasn't expecting that twist at the end. Good job.. keep writing!
MJY chapter 1 . 12/2/2002
I like it. It's simple and rythmical. I like the way you use enjambent in the poem as if the reader is being pushed towards the end. Is that how you feel by the actions of the 'You' in the poem?