Reviews for Daddy, I Love You
lifesrough chapter 1 . 5/5/2003
This is so good! It almost left me speachless! I am also getting all teary! This is such a good poem! I love how it all flowed together! It really shows all of what you have been going through!
Jacinna chapter 1 . 3/1/2003
Oh my god..that poem made me cry..never knew someone could feel the same way as me..
Namir Swiftpaw chapter 1 . 12/22/2002 hatred for this man just grows and grows.

He sounds a lot like my father, actually. Only my father *did* hit me, and do other things. ::growl::

Grrr...::ahem:: Anyway...this was good. The repetition made it all the more powerful.

Keep writing.

~Namir Swiftpaw
BlueMoonDuchess chapter 1 . 12/19/2002
Aww that's soo sad! Excellently written!
Embyr Black chapter 1 . 12/6/2002
that was great. sad thats its true. and that poem u reviewed its true.
Joflower chapter 1 . 12/5/2002
this is so sad! keep up the good work!
ScarletDreamer chapter 1 . 12/2/2002
hey,this poem is very well written :)


ps:thanks for reviewin' my work ;)
WaterFarie88 chapter 1 . 12/2/2002
This is sad. I loved it! Tell you friend that she should write more poems.
neverAgaintruth chapter 1 . 12/2/2002
oh! that was so sad! I can totally relate at times..I love my Dad..sometimes he's too hard. He's a very good Dad...And I love him. if you want tell your friend to read a poem I wrote yesterday called, "Children Cry" about how sometimes Dad's leave..