Reviews for Aries's Lover |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I'm not really good at reviews but I really love how you describe the way that the wisper wakes him up it is so well done and rhymes beautifully. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey! Now they are seeing the god of sun... I just can't get over all the nice imgary showing here. fireflies, water fall... there is not even a tree around here, so all those are really magical to me. |
![]() ![]() ![]() sob sob sob...I'm crying so bad I can even see what I'm typing anymore... so much sadness and desperation... they are so doomed... sob |
![]() ![]() ![]() midterm...I hope you did well! _ What a pair of tragic lovers...yet they love each other so much. that makes the story evem more sad. YOu're really amazing, you know that? |
![]() ![]() ![]() sob sob sob This can't be happening! sign... I'm getting so emotional. You're work is too intense. So sad... waht a lovely story |
![]() ![]() ![]() .. running out of things to say! excellent job, keep writing and update soon.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() NO! this is getting hopeless! They are dying, and the devil is winning! Evil will not win! never! Love will prevail! _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() cool! loved it .. |
![]() ![]() ![]() NO! demonic girls! leave him alone! the poor lovers. What a journey they are taking! Poor girl...she can't breath oh, I forget to tell you. I really like your ways with words...very poetic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved the last part |
![]() ![]() ![]() you're such a talented writier! |
![]() ![]() ![]() NO! this is so horrible! Don't go! sob... this is really, really getiing interesting. very cool very good What a magical picture. nymph dancing... great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's alright, we can wait...your work is really good and it's worht waiting for. on second thought, it is not alright! YOur writing is so good someone might steal it if you left it! that will be bad! _ No! vanished! our tragic lovers got seperated! this is horrible! very brave attitude, very strong feelings. with love there is always strength! this poem is magical! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah! Day come! Another really lovely lovely place. I can't believe how wonderful all those palces are. very magical. YOu're such a wonderful writer! Ivy tower, beautiful |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was kick ass! gotta go need to read your next installment. |