Reviews for Aries's Lover
wonky donkey chapter 11 . 4/27/2003
I'm not really good at reviews but I really love how you describe the way that the wisper wakes him up it is so well done and rhymes beautifully.
Princess Mulan chapter 13 . 4/27/2003
hey! Now they are seeing the god of sun...

I just can't get over all the nice imgary showing here. fireflies, water fall...

there is not even a tree around here, so all those are really magical to me.
Princess Mulan chapter 12 . 4/27/2003
sob sob sob...I'm crying so bad I can even see what I'm typing anymore...

so much sadness and desperation...

they are so doomed...

sob
Princess Mulan chapter 11 . 4/27/2003
midterm...I hope you did well! _

What a pair of tragic lovers...yet they love each other so much.

that makes the story evem more sad.

YOu're really amazing, you know that?
Princess Mulan chapter 10 . 4/27/2003
sob sob sob

This can't be happening!

sign...

I'm getting so emotional. You're work is too intense.

So sad...

waht a lovely story
kamikaze899 chapter 14 . 4/27/2003
.. running out of things to say! excellent job, keep writing and update soon..
Princess Mulan chapter 9 . 4/27/2003
NO!

this is getting hopeless! They are dying, and the devil is winning!

Evil will not win!

never! Love will prevail! _
kamikaze899 chapter 9 . 4/27/2003
cool! loved it ..
Princess Mulan chapter 8 . 4/27/2003
NO! demonic girls!

leave him alone!

the poor lovers. What a journey they are taking!

Poor girl...she can't breath

oh, I forget to tell you. I really like your ways with words...very poetic.
kamikaze899 chapter 2 . 4/27/2003
loved the last part
kamikaze899 chapter 1 . 4/27/2003
you're such a talented writier!
Princess Mulan chapter 7 . 4/27/2003
NO! this is so horrible!

Don't go!

sob...

this is really, really getiing interesting.

very cool very good

What a magical picture. nymph dancing...

great job!
Princess Mulan chapter 6 . 4/27/2003
It's alright, we can wait...your work is really good and it's worht waiting for.

on second thought, it is not alright! YOur writing is so good someone might steal it if you left it!

that will be bad!

_

No! vanished! our tragic lovers got seperated! this is horrible!

very brave attitude, very strong feelings. with love there is always strength!

this poem is magical!
Princess Mulan chapter 5 . 4/27/2003
Yeah!

Day come!

Another really lovely lovely place. I can't believe how wonderful all those palces are. very magical.

YOu're such a wonderful writer!

Ivy tower, beautiful
wonky donkey chapter 1 . 4/27/2003
That was kick ass! gotta go need to read your next installment.
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