incredible imagry in this one, and as always, beautifully written, seems like the story is staring to move, excellent excellent job

interesting, and again as always, beautifully written, you could give Dante a run for his money, excellent job

aw, again it's extremely well written and this one is a lil sad, like it though, and so far how they all sort of end in the same format, like that cause it kinda drives the point home, nicely done

wow, amazingly written and pretty, interesting continuation, nicely done

OMG, im so sory, i was lying in bed last night thinking about poetry and suddenly realised i hadnt checked on fanfiction in AGES.

i have been single time i read one of your chapters i always think, *ok now this is my favourite chapter* thay are al so gothic mystical and beautiful.i cant get over how perfect they are how HOGGING ALL THE TALENT HELLO!

and i dont know what you are talking about the last bit was so so intrcate and lovely

Then, through the light, our bare palms kissed,

And with the touch there rose a swift

Eclipse.

I LOVED IT, it was a great way to describe it *i mean that is im right in what i am thinking* its totally original and makes it all the more excruciatingly blissful.

lovely chapter *its now my favourite* welldone, kudos

omg! this is so amazing. it really is great. it's so moving and you word is so beautifully. this really sounds like an epic 's absolutely incridible.

you know me, i can't understand anything. so yeah, *blushing profusely* what happened exactly? *feels like a dumb butt for asking* OH! i'm trying to figure out what happens next in the high school fic, so if ya could gimme an idea or something i'd appreciate it b/c you're in it.

This is so cool. Homer had NOTHING on your epic writing skill. Awesome job. I guess you're my main competition. You have much better rhyming skill than I do. But you're older than I am so I guess that makes tons of sense. But still. ok good job.

OMG! this is amazingly good. i really like it. ure a really good writer. i thnk im gonna go read more of ure stuff now. bye

why helo darling!~

this was such a moving chapter my eyes literally widened with every word, it was truly wonderful the last bit was so clever and just fit oh so well, i loved it

With eyes connected, as on cue,

We knew.

so sweet, a nice lil valentines pressie for moi, kudos to you chica!

well, i'm glad you review my fics too. i'll have to send you a pic of Benji and Joel so you know who I'm writing about. i think i'll do that like right now so... gotta find a good pic. ok i found one, so i'll send them to ya so you don't have to go searching the web for it. hehehehehe. i'm insain

ooooohoooooo my goooohoood *weeps into hands* crimany be my name, amazing!

*composes self* *holds right hand up*

i, last name., swear to chop all of my favourite storys list down so that this is one of the only ones there.*sings New Zealands national anthem (god of nations)* do i sense an end up coming? i should hope not.

great chapter chica

i tell ya, it's good. i really think you should publish it and get Barnes and Noble to sell it. but of course that's just me. tell ya what you at least try to get it published for B&N and i'll think about doing a childrens story to publish or something

oo, very pretty, i like it

! really good !