:) :) :) I like!

ah, this is really interesting... :)

This is awesome!

I forgot to look out for new chapters... :( Please forgive me!

i think i am going to have to rebuke my last review, if i remember rightly i said that chapter 8 was my favourite cahpter, well i have a new one, this one brought tears to my eyes...it was absoluitly exquiste stunning, true poetry! is it just me or are your chapters getting better and better? you leave all other poetry out in the cold. truly amazing, maybe you should publish your own poetry book. when you do tell me and ill buy it once i get some money ;)

this reminds me of that song "I'd do anything" by simple plan, but prolly cause it's on MTV right now. this is really good. Are you gonna get it published? you should then it'd be sold at Barnes and Noble and I would definatly buy it

genius, this would have to be my fav chapter yet, i loved the masters cries, the were wonderfully well written and very how should i say i dont know *picturesqe* lol its not a word but its all that came to mind...or maybe it is a word...god i dunno my minds a blank adn even if it was a word i know fpr sure i didnt speel it right...thats kind of embarrassing when your poetry is so lovely and flawless of mistakes, kudos

have you ever had things happen to you, but you don't notice until it's waaaaaaay too late? like falling down a flight of concrete steps? i did it sunday. just sorta happened with MASSIVE consiquences and it mesed up my spelling ability, well that and my snowboarding the day after. ok rambling as usual. but i like this, it gets better than the myths i'm reading for class. keep it up

oh wow, so beautiful, so sad,

I called your name, but ‘twas too late:

You stood already near the gate

With Fate.

that gave me the major goose pimples...i loved it, yet another beautiful chapter of aries lover, you never disapoint, such lovely language, every line is politcally correct (? dont ask *why i typed that*, but anyway once again you have my gratitude for letting me read this.

kudos glitterjewele

... *strugles to write something. anything. can't think. too early is her excuse. but this reviewer needs some use (i don't know, i'm tired)* ok, i love the way you write and sometimes i put of reading it, but mostly cause i got school and crap, but that's ok. i have to write a birthday fic for so ttfn

PS

nymphs are awsome (ok i'm sleep deprived nad i have no clue what i'm doing)

Very beautiful and creative. Wonderful use of vocabulary and metaphors! Punctuation could be better, but spelling is excellent! You've got big talent, so don't waste it; keep writing! And if you have spare time, could you possibly read and review some of my works? It is greatly appreciated.

PS: yes, it is kind of like the 5th Harry Potter book. I'm desperate for it to come out!

yay this got through to u, apparently fanficton is down *shrugs* but i got in...wouldnt u like to know lol, ok this was so beautiful, i was listening to it with darren hayes' song insatiable...whenever i hear his song i imagine medievil time london cobblestone streets with horses pulling carriages, and stuff and thats also how i view your poem well kinda in that sort of theme, so i sort of got the whole feeling going, it was beautiful the language you use makes it all come to life, have i told u it reminds me of the highwayman, i dont know but this is brill, pure kudos to you, another chapter yay

hey! it's me. i hate bein back at school, but your poetry has been the high point in my day (besides still standing and crossing jordan and listening to Eminem *blushes*)

ok well, u rock at writing and i hope that pretty soon you'll be reviewing chpr 18 of stoners (if i get it started)

ok enough of my ramblings g'night

i hate you. you're way to good a writer to be believed! and i fell you abotu HP #5!

PS: i don't really hate you, i'm srue you care about that sooo much.

sorry it took me sooooo long, i had camp and christmas w/ my family (yuck!) and i had no time really for anything. sorry (slaps hand) bad llama. but i really like this and you leave me speachless, ususally i can write a review consisting of 4-5 paragraphs for a story or poem, but not w/ you and i don't know if that's good or bad *rubs chin in wonderment* ok i'm hyper (couldn't you tell?) great job, talk laterz