Reviews for Aries's Lover
Dirty Wallpaper chapter 5 . 12/25/2002
what a lovely surprise, another update, beautiful, kudos
Dirty Wallpaper chapter 4 . 12/19/2002
third person, very cool, moving right along, this poem reminds me of "the highwayman" i love this poem as much as i love that poem. my favourite line was

* Wound ivy touched by moonlight's hands*

yet again beautiful, o.o i soo hope u do another one like this, u are a true poet, kudos!
Black Ladybug chapter 4 . 12/18/2002
u just get better and better. i talk bout myself in the 3rd person sometimes, drives people nuts :D and i love it. ok i'm like really excited cause i got the boy i like w/ super string and he was threatening me tonight w/ perfume crap. :D so i'm super even w/ the migrane.
Gevo chapter 4 . 12/17/2002
Hey I love this! Keep writing! I'll keep following...
Black Ladybug chapter 3 . 12/10/2002
i love the last line always being one or two words. its great, you have great tallent
Werecat99 chapter 1 . 12/10/2002
That was awesome! the imagery was astounding, and made my heart smile. Keep it up, great work.
Dirty Wallpaper chapter 3 . 12/9/2002
*wipes away tear* so beautiful...this author is amazing, she has my praise, so lovely, tell her luck for her finals...arrg although i am confused u didnt write this? hmmmk? right, bravo ~~ Jangles
wingless chapter 2 . 12/9/2002
this is beautiful. it uses beautiful words. its shocking...just amazing

and thanks so much by the way for your review for cradled in your claw

:) i always love reviews
Dirty Wallpaper chapter 2 . 12/7/2002
o wow, im gaping...i dont see how people can use words so creative and wonderful U my dear are going on my favourites, its one of the best poems i have read in a long time, very mythical in a non mythical and original way...and its in chapters *faints* BRAVO FOREVER ~~~ Jangles
Black Ladybug chapter 2 . 12/7/2002
*speachless (cause my brain hurts)* i like it so far, i really do and not cause you're the only person who reviews all my stories. you're a great writer keep it up
Black Ladybug chapter 1 . 12/7/2002
i've been meaning to read your chocolate truffle story or w/e it is, i'm a little brain dead right now so i can't think. but i like this one. i'm trying really hard to update the stoners story and my new lost boys story... ummm keep up the good work
Kendal chapter 2 . 12/4/2002
Far be it from me not to give support during finals week. ;) I'm procrastinating on one of the five-page papers I have due tomorrow. ::sigh::

But anyway, I love the imagery in this, especially the use of color words. I've given up on rhyming poetry - mine always manages to sound cheesy - so major props for the rhyming. The whole thing has a nice rhythm to it (bear with me; my vocabulary for analyzing poetry seems to have disappeared) and I like the use of a single word or shorter phrase for the last line. Gives it more impact. :) I like the subject matter, too. You manage it well.

Thanks for the reviews, btw! I'd been meaning to e-mail you, but that keeps getting set back due to papers and other various activities I keep getting drawn into against my will.
Yasha chapter 1 . 12/3/2002
That was beautiful! _ Thanks for your review on my poem, it's great to actually get advice(especially from a good writer like yourself ) It was just the rough draft and I'll fix it up...but anyway! Yours gives me a really nice image- something I can't really do, and I loved how it made me think of the Incubis song "I Wish You Were Here" and Our Lady Peace's "Somewhere Out There". I didn't have time to visit the site; pizza's ready! - Loved it! Keep up the wonderful work!
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