what a lovely surprise, another update, beautiful, kudos

third person, very cool, moving right along, this poem reminds me of "the highwayman" i love this poem as much as i love that poem. my favourite line was

* Wound ivy touched by moonlight's hands*

yet again beautiful, o.o i soo hope u do another one like this, u are a true poet, kudos!

u just get better and better. i talk bout myself in the 3rd person sometimes, drives people nuts :D and i love it. ok i'm like really excited cause i got the boy i like w/ super string and he was threatening me tonight w/ perfume crap. :D so i'm super even w/ the migrane.

Hey I love this! Keep writing! I'll keep following...

i love the last line always being one or two words. its great, you have great tallent

That was awesome! the imagery was astounding, and made my heart smile. Keep it up, great work.

*wipes away tear* so beautiful...this author is amazing, she has my praise, so lovely, tell her luck for her finals...arrg although i am confused u didnt write this? hmmmk? right, bravo ~~ Jangles

this is beautiful. it uses beautiful words. its shocking...just amazing

and thanks so much by the way for your review for cradled in your claw

:) i always love reviews

o wow, im gaping...i dont see how people can use words so cleverly...so creative and wonderful U my dear are going on my favourites, its one of the best poems i have read in a long time, very mythical in a non mythical and original way...and its in chapters *faints* BRAVO FOREVER ~~~ Jangles

*speachless (cause my brain hurts)* i like it so far, i really do and not cause you're the only person who reviews all my stories. you're a great writer keep it up

i've been meaning to read your chocolate truffle story or w/e it is, i'm a little brain dead right now so i can't think. but i like this one. i'm trying really hard to update the stoners story and my new lost boys story... ummm keep up the good work

Far be it from me not to give support during finals week. ;) I'm procrastinating on one of the five-page papers I have due tomorrow. ::sigh::

But anyway, I love the imagery in this, especially the use of color words. I've given up on rhyming poetry - mine always manages to sound cheesy - so major props for the rhyming. The whole thing has a nice rhythm to it (bear with me; my vocabulary for analyzing poetry seems to have disappeared) and I like the use of a single word or shorter phrase for the last line. Gives it more impact. :) I like the subject matter, too. You manage it well.

Thanks for the reviews, btw! I'd been meaning to e-mail you, but that keeps getting set back due to papers and other various activities I keep getting drawn into against my will.

That was beautiful! _ Thanks for your review on my poem, it's great to actually get advice(especially from a good writer like yourself ) It was just the rough draft and I'll fix it up...but anyway! Yours gives me a really nice image- something I can't really do, and I loved how it made me think of the Incubis song "I Wish You Were Here" and Our Lady Peace's "Somewhere Out There". I didn't have time to visit the site; pizza's ready! - Loved it! Keep up the wonderful work!