fantastic1 I love this and was obsessed with reading it for two days!
I love the way you write and hope to see more at some point! XD

I enjoyed this story immensely. Perhaps you could write a sequel od Ann and Brian further exploits. It'll be interesting to discover which one of them is more insane.

And here, just so you can get pissed at me for taking up space...(sorry, I forgot to say this, and you asked) the moral as I see it is that you must seek happiness to find it. Just waiting for it to spontaneously come to you is never quite good enough to attain true joy. I learned that long ago...

Apologies for giving you useless information and THEN answering your question~

~SolarCloud

And here I was never checking the review history ;_; I'm so sorry. I wish I had been here for the whole thing while it was being written instead of giving late feedback.

This was a rather nice story, actually. For some reason, it made me smile quite a bit, and I rarely smile. Although what appealed to me, I could not explain. I must say that you are very grammatically correct, and not half-bad at a form of dark humor. You do need a lot more description in your prose, and that's the only constructive criticism I have for you. I do like the detached observation, and the character interaction is truly great.

Sorry for the late(and bloated) feedback,

~SolarCloud

The moral is...go and doodle on the kouhai board and someday you'll be good enough for senpai! *Sees everyone staring at her* WHAT? Feh, you NON-OEKAKI-ERS wouldn't get it -_-;;...anyways...Yeah, this is Penguin-14 from Bakaneko _ Umm...the REAL moral is...don't kill stuff? UNLESS it's a puffin, in which case...OPEN FIRE!

Hey, this is from the AGN oekaki board. Anywho... I like it! ::lol:: You and I will get along just fine. ::Dashes off to go read the dolly stories::

Well Selan you made a work of art. I knew you had some moral fiber in you! Ann is as accepting as I want to be. Keep up the good stuff. (And write faster next time.)

Yey! Story's over. And Brian's gonna be happy.I hope.

On another note, I suk at morals. So here goes a shot at trying to figure out the moral.

Nobody is always happy.

. . That's prolly not it. But that's what I learned in the last chapter.

Oh my god this is the best story I've read in a very long time! You are fantastic, you made me cry! The only other books that made me cry where "Catcher in the Rye" And "Harry Potter and the prisoner of Azkaban." Bravo! I'd give you an award but I'm not in charge of those kinds of things.

Yay, good story, Sel-chan!

Moral cool.

And anybody who didn't review this story is EVIL! PURE EVIL!

want me hunt them down and make them review for you?

(She says 's right, she's behind me.*quick glance over shoulder* and she's looking -ish)

Okay, review getting long.

GOOD STORY! BRIAN COOL .

I loved it! I think the moral was that you shouldn't shoot your friends, but I could be wrong.

*wipes tears* that.. made me cry ;-;. *just read 12-17* ;-;. my god Selan.. you are one of the best story writers online that i can think of ;-;. *worships SP*.

POST MORE, DARN YOU!

I was tired, but woke up at eleven none the less and started to read this. So I'm a little werd. Pfft. :D I like it. I wish there was more to read, but I also feel the need to beat Crank into the ground with a sledge hammer and then burn his remians XDD

Yes, we all have homicidle tendencies!

Just kidding

~Rae

Wow! This story is F-ing brilliant!