Reviews for Keep Me Living
Dafna chapter 1 . 12/8/2002
aww, that's sweet...I didn't know you were a poet until I read this and the others you have here...:)
Doug chapter 1 . 12/7/2002
Wow...that was some good writing there. Nice rhyme and I think Jade's right about writing from the heart, your best work comes from it, so don't hold back.
JadeTheDolphinQueen1 chapter 1 . 12/4/2002
That was so beatiful, and straight from the heart.

(sheds a tear of joy)I just want you to know, that I'll always be there for you no matter what. That was the most touching poem I've ever read thank you so much.

I can't wait either, for the day when I't be just you and me

And we live upon the sea

With our imaginary fairy Squiggy!(lol) almost done with that comic for you too. I have a car now, maybe, if the weather gets nicer and mom actually allows me to drive it I'll come over and give it to you.

Gotta agree with you, I can't wait for the day when our promise will come true.

(goes to steal a time machine) Be back soon...If you hear any police sirens duck and cover.

Love you always Liza

Jade
girloz14 chapter 1 . 12/4/2002
Pretty, pretty, pretty. I luvs it.