Reviews for The Hata
SassyLil'Thunderstorm chapter 2 . 10/31/2005
Hehe...and I thought I wrote evil stuff...its definetely fiery...and that's me so you know I love it...
Cindy Moon chapter 2 . 6/26/2003
More power to ya pplz
Spanish Amor chapter 1 . 6/17/2003
haha

thought about doing those things too many times, to too many ppl

pop a cap in yo ass,

ha how you like that bitch?

... too many times...
Ashes of a Willow chapter 1 . 6/14/2003
I loved the ending! It wrapped up very nicely!
Sarina Fannel chapter 2 . 5/17/2003
marvolose..
Sarina Fannel chapter 1 . 5/17/2003
interseting peice..
DaughterofDeath chapter 1 . 5/16/2003
gory, good
Meisyria chapter 1 . 4/19/2003
This is one cool ass poem. I like it cause it sounds like a hot freestyle. Keep it up.
Erotica Within chapter 1 . 4/15/2003
hey, what sup? Thanks for the review.. i thought I'd check some of your stuff out too. I liked this poem, reminds me of highschool back when I went.. then I dropped out.. lol oops. Oh well. Real good.. i'll read more laters...
DarkestHeart chapter 2 . 3/24/2003
oh, I sense school grounds here! And you know what? Things never change! Stick with this attitude and you'll do well! Keep up the good work!

DH
jae.ni chapter 1 . 3/7/2003
nice..! u have this rhyme thing goin on girl! this could make a really good rap song.. D
Cindy Moon chapter 1 . 1/18/2003
yep... these r them cheerleaders at mai school

good job with this one. Keep writing neh?