Reviews for Mouse Ball
Shuyan chapter 1 . 3/6/2005
This is one amazing story. Great job its very detailed and well thought out. Please continue! If you have a chance can you check out my story Shade of darkness
Aemilia chapter 1 . 8/30/2004
More good stuff. It's interesting to see familiar characters through unfamiliar eyes.
DeathsDragon chapter 1 . 4/12/2004
*snickering* I want one of his rats, theres cooler than mine were. They bit people the little buggers. But I do love ya stories an so on, wouldn't be reviewing so much otherwise...
Marigold Futura chapter 1 . 12/5/2002
Hee. Stupid, sexy Seth! Oh, and I have to point this out because it's been bugging me for ages. When you say "wane", I think you mean "wan", which means melancholy. Or else you mean "waning", as in diminishing. But "wane" is a verb, not an adjective. Yeah, I know. Stupid English fiend me. Oh, and the pizza box description confuzzles me. But Rat-Cakes is cute. So is David.