Reviews for Little swinging girl
Kelpylion chapter 1 . 7/29/2003
LMAO! I love falling like that...and the ending is hilarious.
Kid Death chapter 1 . 7/10/2003
ah, the feel of flying before death. How i wish i could feel that.
Me chapter 1 . 1/9/2003
I love the end! hehehe. it does make it seem like she's falling off a cliff, not a swing, though. i still love it. you really captured what its like to fly through the air like that. Awesome.

Luv me.
Rei June chapter 1 . 12/26/2002
Haha... Maybe I shouldn't laugh but it's kinda funny in the end.

I think this poem is good _
Mirri Night chapter 1 . 12/23/2002
Holy SH*T - oh well, they probably deserved it. o_o wait a sec...

I really liked this one. Short, simple, dramatic, fun _
Sushi-San chapter 1 . 12/14/2002
lol! did she fall or something?

nice job MIRRIOR-KOI (i still like sushi better)

i put some new stuff up please R&R!

you better put some more stuff up!

i'm waiting...stil waiting...any second now...

Sushi-san out!

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Kachiko chapter 1 . 12/10/2002
maybe it shouldn't have been funny but the THUNK *was* funny-for me, anyway _

very "innocent" and fresh.
Catch Ya Later Alligator chapter 1 . 12/9/2002
It made me go O.o but I like it a lot. . .funny in a bitter sort of way.
monkeyqueen chapter 1 . 12/7/2002
WOW..this poem reminds me of when you are little and wish you fly, and just get away form it all. But then reality hits you and thunk..you remmeber you can't fly..hehe..see i looked at your poems..

sunnybuns