| Reviews for Paradise |
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  Logana chapter 3 . 1/21/2003 Interesting... Nice, smoth, but waaaay too short. Really good!p.s. Good spelling. d.s. |
 sathepine chapter 3 . 12/20/2002 okay, this is getting even more interesting, i guess. a four-year-old? hmmm! continue, please... though, next time, i hope it isn't too short... |
| sathepine chapter 2 . 12/10/2002 hmm... getting interesting, but nothing much has happened yet. please continue... |
| Malayna chapter 2 . 12/7/2002 Good... Keep goin! |
| Gandalf1 chapter 1 . 12/6/2002 Good start. Very Smooth. |
| sathepine chapter 1 . 12/5/2002 hmm... interesting... i wonder what happens next? (death! death! death!)... pls. continue... |