Reviews for Paradise
Logana chapter 3 . 1/21/2003
Interesting...

Nice, smoth, but waaaay too short. Really good!p.s. Good spelling. d.s.
sathepine chapter 3 . 12/20/2002
okay, this is getting even more interesting, i guess. a four-year-old? hmmm! continue, please... though, next time, i hope it isn't too short...
sathepine chapter 2 . 12/10/2002
hmm... getting interesting, but nothing much has happened yet. please continue...
Malayna chapter 2 . 12/7/2002
Good... Keep goin!
Gandalf1 chapter 1 . 12/6/2002
Good start. Very Smooth.
sathepine chapter 1 . 12/5/2002
hmm... interesting... i wonder what happens next? (death! death! death!)... pls. continue...