Reviews for Running |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hi there, I could of sworn I read this before. I wouldn't forget Hazel and her predicament. I still like it. Good Job! *_* |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Running" eh? Well, it's an interesting enough concept, but I think we'd love to learn more about Them for a change. Some of the chapters need some work (typos, etc.), but other than that it's good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well you seem to be doing pretty well without the need for you friend! ;) I hope that you can keep up the writing because I, obviously, am not the only one that loves your story. Silver~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() a bloody sweet story, you should write more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good job. Nice turn in the plot and incorporation of new characters into it as well. Please keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting chapter- Ryth is a jerk. please continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like Ryth already, he seems so funny for some reason, I don't know why, could just be me though. I can't wait to see what happens next. Write,write, write. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really great, you have 2 keep up the writing. Just a couple of questions: 1) Whatever happened to Mischa? 2) What are the powers of the guys Hazel met in the woods? 3) What was Hazel's mom's power? Just a little curious...anyway, keep writing, I have to know what happens next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was really good, can't wait for more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Geez, it's LONG enough, but i love it! you should seriously try to get it published. Keep it up! you have a talent! ~*~AngelFire~*~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() 1. srry haven't been writing 2. this is getting better and better by the chapter...BUT COULD WE KNOE MORE ABOUT 'THEM'? 3. IS Mischa okies? |
![]() ![]() ![]() wonderful. interesting. nice. fantastic. amazing. ... is there any other words to describe... i am totally speechless... can't wait for next chappy to be up! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like it a lot. especially how she can so vividly imagine the forest- fading is basically like teleporting i gather. please continue. what's Mischa's power again? or does she not have one? i've forgotten. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like what you did with Louise . Pretty crafty. Keep up the good work! It's brillant so far . |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! This story is brillant down to the very last word. Please keep on writing! I'm very curious on what Louise is going to do to Hazel and Mischa. |