Reviews for Outcast |
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![]() ![]() Hey. that decribes me hm that rocks my socks i'm gunna hang it upin my locker! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I logged in just for you. This is good... and if you weren't like you were you wouldn't be half the fun you are, or even half as great of a brother as you are. Lovies Ishee-ness |
![]() ![]() I liked some of the rhythm, because it really kept the poem flowing. Also, the poem, if I read it out loud, it would have probably struck me hard. Good job. God help the outcasts. |
![]() ![]() ![]() *whimpers* thats so pretty! I know these feelings so fucking well...this is such a good poem. It explains so many people, including me, perfectly! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This one's real power lies in the last line. We don't understand the total magnitude of your torment until the very last line, and I think this is excellent. Keep up the good work! |