Reviews for Outcast
Elle chapter 1 . 8/19/2003
Hey. that decribes me hm that rocks my socks i'm gunna hang it upin my locker!
Neptican chapter 1 . 7/27/2003
I logged in just for you.

This is good... and if you weren't like you were you wouldn't be half the fun you are, or even half as great of a brother as you are.

Lovies

Ishee-ness
Kitana chapter 1 . 7/3/2003
I liked some of the rhythm, because it really kept the poem flowing. Also, the poem, if I read it out loud, it would have probably struck me hard. Good job. God help the outcasts.
Darkpurpleflame chapter 1 . 5/10/2003
*whimpers* thats so pretty!

I know these feelings so fucking well...this is such a good poem. It explains so many people, including me, perfectly!
youguessedit chapter 1 . 12/6/2002
This one's real power lies in the last line. We don't understand the total

magnitude of your torment until the very last line, and I think this is

excellent. Keep up the good work!