Reviews for She
Redbird chapter 1 . 12/9/2002
Sorry I can't give you a signed review, but my penname is Redbird. I really liked it! The word "she" got repetetive, but it propable served a purpose. I found myself just reading the words she was. Anyway, very good! Keep on writing, though I hope you do not need my consent to do so.
Tifa Highwind chapter 1 . 12/7/2002
I like your style, I think you wrote the wrong date though, keep writing and check my work out too!
KrImZoN sHaDoWz chapter 1 . 12/7/2002
I loved this poem..I can relate to it so much..Not letting people see the real you that's hurting and putting on a mask of perfection..Geez, I really like this poem. It's simple yet deep.

Keep writing.

-Tracie-
No Longer Posting Here chapter 1 . 12/7/2002
that was great. i love it.

~GeN!