Reviews for The Old Man
target bath chapter 1 . 4/29/2003
mm...its fabulous
Nerilka-chan chapter 1 . 4/15/2003
It left me smiling, hopefully what it was meant to do. -Nchan
Smile for insanity chapter 1 . 4/14/2003
A lovely glimpse of the future, or you just haven't come to terms with the fact you are color-blind.
wheresmydopamine chapter 1 . 4/2/2003
This is sweet. I love your work.
charredrose chapter 1 . 1/23/2003
this is so... *frustrated sigh* GOOD! i don't even know how to say it... it's so random, it gives us a sense of something, something that we can't comprehend. ohh, just inspired myself... anyways, keep writing!
Werecat99 chapter 1 . 1/23/2003
That was very beautiful. I kind of like the crazy ones too...
Not So Soft chapter 1 . 1/5/2003
...I did not get it. But thats okay! *skips away merrily*
Broadwaypoetess LaBloodyRose chapter 1 . 12/29/2002
*chuckles* Okay, Aftertaste...

George: The sky is bronze, dammit! BRONZE!
Slim chapter 1 . 12/17/2002
hehe! That was funny. I really liked how you wrote it. - Very good!

*slim*
Angelic Hooligan chapter 1 . 12/13/2002
*laughing* I like.
breakdown in the waiting room chapter 1 . 12/12/2002
*giggles hyserically* I liked this! Very nice, how you wrote the lines. That always makes poetry read better, IMO. Ending is magneficent ;)
Wolfychann chapter 1 . 12/9/2002
Nice little bite of life... have you read "The Giver," by Lois Lowry? This poem really reminded me of it.
Ann Lee chapter 1 . 12/8/2002
::lh:: I like it. -_. lol.
Needa S chapter 1 . 12/8/2002
Lol awesome job! Keep writing.