Reviews for Homesick
Dragen Eyez chapter 1 . 9/5/2004
being homesick is a wonderful allusion for leaving cutting behind... I've gotta say though, regaining sanity is a good, good thing. there's something kind of nice about being sane sometimes..
Dragen Eyez chapter 1 . 9/5/2004
being homesick is a wonderful allusion for leaving cutting behind... I've gotta say though, regaining sanity is a good, good thing. there's something kind of nice about being sane sometimes..
HereIDreamtIWasAnArchitect chapter 1 . 7/15/2003
i totally understand trying to stop cutting. and i love the last two lines. you're really good at poems as well as stories, looks like how long has it been since you stopped?
Suicidal Butterfly chapter 1 . 2/19/2003
I love the touche of hope at the end!
Poppyseed chapter 1 . 12/16/2002
Good poem...I know where you're coming from...
Kayley chapter 1 . 12/8/2002
It was implied:

"A pain that runs deep, it needs to be freed

By a razor, a knife… The ache’s gone when I bleed."

"I long for the hunger and the razor’s sharp touch."

"I gave up my razors, my obsession with vanity."

I thought it was pretty clear... hm.. I guess I can rewrite it.
Deathsythe chapter 1 . 12/7/2002
Nice flow at the beggining, it's kinda lost in the middle, but it comes back...kinda. Anyway, it was a pretty decent poem and though what you let go wasn't said, you still get your point accross.

Keep it up.

D-sythe