|Reviews for Deceit|
| AnonymousReads chapter 24 . 10/2/2012
Yeah I loved the plot. Great story. :)
| CrazyCinderellaGirl chapter 24 . 11/22/2011
Oh my gosh! That was intense and amazing! Te whole Clay and Joel thing was sooo disturbing but interesting! I cried (dunno why!) in chapter 23 I think, when Clay was talking about his past then shot Jesse I was like NOOOO! :p you're amazing! Keep writing! (longest review ever!)
| CANADAEH chapter 4 . 2/25/2010
HAHAHA. I JUST LEARNED THOSE EXACT SAME CONCEPTS IN MATH. i can relate to Brianna, it's uncharacteristically hard for me ;-;
| Your Execution chapter 24 . 11/27/2009
Oh and if you never found out, Falsa Facades is another story here on fp. Same basic plot as this. ANYWAY, this was a really good story :D I think the end coulve been better but it's still good. The Forever and Ever' thing was cute. Yeah. :F
| Dwindling Fire chapter 2 . 8/7/2009
i like xD
| pretitiful chapter 24 . 12/26/2008
this story was very enjoyable.
i liked the characters and the story line was creative.
loved the fact that jesse moved school.
| Hazelnut Romance chapter 24 . 4/15/2008
| Promethean Cult chapter 24 . 7/18/2007
Okay, so, a few things I'd like to say:
I LOVED this story. The writing was good and tie that in with one of my all time favorite plots: girl going to a boys school.
Second: I liked it for the most part but certain things were mising. Like, for instance, Jesse's confusion about his feelings for "Brian." Joel tells us all about them but that's the first time we heard about that.
Thirdly: The chapter before the last almost made me cry...I'll admit, lol.
Fourthly: Um...yeah, nothing else to say. Again: liked the story. Good job.
| ANGEL992210 chapter 24 . 3/16/2007
VERY NICE JOB.
| amo angel324 chapter 24 . 2/25/2007
THIS IS A VERY GOOD STORY AND I LOVE IT. I ABSOLUTLY ADORE JESSE. HIS DISCREPTION IS SO HOT AND I WOULD LOVE TO BE BRIANNA. I AM OFFICIALLY JEALOUS. LOL :-)
| atreyu love chapter 14 . 1/7/2007
| atreyu love chapter 2 . 1/7/2007
| AJS chapter 24 . 12/20/2006
Well, Brianna & Jesse sure are cute together (: Gah. haha. I can't believe that he came to her school just to be with her - that's adorable. I don't understand why they couldn't be together though, just because they didn't go to the same school anymore. Ah I'm kind of resentful towards Mimi for calling Brianna's parents, because she wasn't even the one who got hurt or anything. Blah. A little resentful but I guess it's okay. I mean, she would have gotten booted out of there sooner or later anyways. That's kind of weird how Brianna went there just their arts programs - I mean, there surely were other great art programs too, right? But hey. She was determined and I admire that.
At least it got her & Jesse together. Damien & Mimi are cute too. Clay is just... messed up. Seriously. And Laurel is slightly messed up as well. They both may have had a hard past but that's seriously no excuse... blah, whatever.
But yeah. I'm glad that Jesse & Brianna are happy and together now. Brianna is such a pretty now. And Jesse sounds so hot *dies* Haha. She thought she was hallucinating. Anyways yeah. They go really well together. This was a good read. Keep up the good work!
| StrawberryStarburst chapter 1 . 9/29/2006
Nice story. You're keeping it realistic (except for the girl in a boys school part but you never know-it might happen). I like how you looked into the deatils about what she has to do about her parents visiting and her coursework.
| Ski Bird chapter 4 . 9/27/2006
i am very sorry if anyone notified you about this story being very similar to that anime rudely.i have read hanakimi before and loved it. i love ur story as well.i have read many story on this site that are even more similar to it than yours. pleaz know that i love it and even IF the plot was the same, people have different i mean some people jsut read and don't wite. like me, but i don't have time so...