Reviews for Deceit
nickyk89 chapter 19 . 8/4/2005
laurel is one bery fucked up girl.
HannahMarieWillow chapter 7 . 6/13/2005
Interesting, if a little tiny bit far fetched. How did she get in so easily?
blue umbrellas chapter 29 . 5/31/2005
great, can't wait for the lemon, i hope it comes soon
fatsoko chapter 1 . 2/22/2005
Lous chapter 4 . 1/15/2005
Obviously you harbour some fantasies about being pretty (like Brianna) and having first pick at lots of handsome guys (like Jesse). Obviously you harbour these fantasies because you have VERY little experience w/ guys, yourself! That's evident because the guys so far are EXTREMELY unrealistic! What sixteen year-olds speak like Jesse?'d be funny if it weren't so embarassingly painful.
depressed-and-bored chapter 29 . 12/26/2004
I LOVE IT. IT WAS AWESOME. and er... if you can plz review my stories..plz
depressed-and-bored chapter 16 . 12/26/2004
CrystalDusk chapter 29 . 12/24/2004
that story was good cept there was too much crying... a bit too emo and not much awkward moments. i LOVE awkward moments! but hey it was still pretty good! keep it up
CrystalDusk chapter 24 . 12/24/2004
~*blink*~ i dont think the police are allowed to just SHOOT him... isnt that like illegal or something?
ddz008 chapter 29 . 12/20/2004
Nice story!I'm really glad that at the end they were finally together!They were so cute!I hope to see the next chapter pretty soon... because we didn't get to know what happened to Joel.:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
Body Electric chapter 29 . 11/23/2004
Aww. This ending made me do a big girly sigh. I want a guy like that...[sighs sadly]
Stormbringer chapter 29 . 11/8/2004
This was one of the best stories I have read. You should write more.
Lunar Ecalypso chapter 29 . 10/11/2004
This is the GREATEST! SO ROMANTIC! I LOVE IT! Is there a sequel or something? I feel so bad for laurel, even though I really hated her. I can't wait to read your other stories!
Lunar Ecalypso chapter 1 . 10/11/2004
Interesting! I can't wait to read more.
praying piper chapter 29 . 9/12/2004
I really really really loved it. THat can't be the end.
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