| Reviews for Deceit |
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   hypnotic-babe chapter 3 . 12/15/2002 kool chap! someone is gonna find out soon...i can see it coming...update |
| Punk Cliche chapter 3 . 12/14/2002 Keep going, I really like this story so far and I want to read more! |
| Blue Roses1 chapter 2 . 12/14/2002 An interesting concept. I'm wondering where you will go with this. Please continue. |
| Swimmababez chapter 2 . 12/8/2002 hey cute story so far keep it up! LoLo |
| Carina chapter 2 . 12/8/2002 Keep it up. I love this story. |
| LettuceGirl chapter 2 . 12/8/2002 Interesting idea.. i wonder how she will get through gym. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 12/8/2002 great stroy...update soon |
| hypnotic-babe chapter 2 . 12/8/2002 Chapter 2 is really good! this story has so much potential...umm one thing tho. She should cut her hair cause she cant wear a hat to sleep and im pretty sure she has to take her hat off for gym class...and another thing..what about her 'girl plroblems'..that would pretty much give it away to u know what I mean? anyways update soon plz |
| hypnotic-babe chapter 1 . 12/8/2002 oh good good! i like! plz continue fast! |
| i'm just lost letsgetlost2hotmail.com chapter 1 . 12/8/2002 i'm too lazy to login ,sorry . but anyway i really love your story |
| mouse chapter 1 . 12/8/2002 REALLY GOOD START...MEH HE HEH ...I LIKE THE IDEA... MAYBE YOU COULD ADD MORE DETAIL OF HER SURROUNDINGS TO ADD MORE FEELING TO IT... AYE AYE AYE I LIKE SPAGHETTI AND EEK NOT TAPIOCA PUDDING BLURGH |
| starryeyedreamer chapter 1 . 12/8/2002 hey thts really good so far keep writting i want to know what happens |
| Joflower chapter 1 . 12/8/2002 do you know what i did? i just sent an incomplete review in here by accident! aaahhhh! oh well, then you get more reviews! anyway, this is a really cool idea! but her mom has a point, i'd be worried if my daughter went to an all guy school, and her friend mimi has a point too. she has to have paper work and stuff that her parents have to sign. but, i bet she will get in somehow, or else it won't be much of a story! keep it up! |
| Joflower chapter 1 . 12/8/2002 hey, i have an idea book too! there are like, over 50 ideas in there from over 3 years. it's nuts coming up with millions of ideas and not enough time to write any of them! |
| Carina chapter 1 . 12/7/2002 Hey this is awesome. Great writing I might add! I hope you continue soon. |