Reviews for Deceit
awaiting impatient person chapter 29 . 9/11/2004
Aww. That was a whole bunch of fluff! Haha. But, I loved it. .:sniff sniff:. It almost made me cry. The end? Wow. Okay. This story wasy really sweet. I thilnk I'm getting cavities now!
sheena chapter 3 . 9/10/2004
its really good so far haven't really had much time to read it but i'm really injoying it, I just have to say you've got quite a few spelling mistakes but nothing serious
passion101 chapter 29 . 9/9/2004
The ending...well, it's a happy one which is good, but it's kinda way to sappy-ish and unrealistic. I liked the idea that she thought it was a dream and stuff. But everything after that was, well, bleh. You could do better I think. By the way, ur new story sounds good, I'll have to check it out.
nedi chapter 29 . 9/9/2004
that was lovely... not at all like i had imagined... but lovely all the same. _
pixy-dizzy chapter 29 . 9/8/2004
*sighs happily* Cute ending...wonderful job on how Brianna was trying to convince herself she was crazy to prevent herself from hurting. Very cute, and very fluffy at the end. I LIKED IT! *huggles* Congratulations on finishing this...But...*sob* Now it's over? Ah well. Again, great job!
Cryptic Insanity chapter 29 . 9/8/2004
It's a sad thing to see this story go, but I love the ending and how she thought she was going crazy. For a minute there I actually thougtht there was going to be a sad ending!
Sing With The Elevator Music chapter 28 . 9/8/2004
omg! i was on the verge of tears! its so good! you should write a sequal...if your done lol and call it laurel's revenge or something. i would read i would so TOTALLY read it sorry inside joke kinda my dad teses me when i say 'totally' or 'like' anyway it was really well written, my only complaint was that it could've done without the heavy swearing.
steph chapter 28 . 9/4/2004
aww i wuv it. this IS a lot like False Facades. it's another story on fictionpress by maeven
CynicInLove chapter 28 . 9/4/2004
i don't get why she would'nt be able to see jessie again...i mean...couldn't she visit him at his place or sometimes over vacation? she could call him up too right? it's not like the students at the academy weren'y allowed phone priveligies...i was just wondering about that. pleas eupdate sooN!
nedi chapter 28 . 9/4/2004
awesome story... i love the plot and characters... and i like how her pencil snaps when she and jesse look at each other! lol. it's sweet.
passion101 chapter 28 . 9/4/2004
Cryptic Insanity chapter 28 . 9/3/2004
YAY JESSE IS GOING TO GO IN A SCHOOL WITH BRIANNA! It's all going to be nice, and legal, and all IS WELL!
Liviania chapter 27 . 7/13/2004
Awesome story, I can't wait for your ending!
ezyret chapter 26 . 6/5/2004
whew! I'm glad there will be more! *hint, hint* good luck on your exams!
SaintEm0 chapter 26 . 6/4/2004
i am very upset that you wont be able to write anymore beause of your up-comming exams but do what oyu need and write when you have the apare time... make it up to us when you have the chance... before summer if need be.
have fun and remember...only glance at the person sitting next to you...don't stare..thats how ou get caught.
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