Very powerfull, emotion filled piece. I'm truly speechless and don't know what else to say.
Take care, D.

its is lovely. really honest. really bleak. really genuine! it realy comunicates ur pain, regret and indesision. it really is beautifully loveingly guilty also the image 'angel in heaven' is very emotive. i like it

Wow... That was gorgeous. I can't relate, since I'm not even out of Middle School yet, but that was beautiful... Keep writing poetry, and I'm sorry for your loss...
Please R&R my stories as well... They aren't nearly as good, but please read them anyways...
Namarie,
*~Nallasariel the Weeper

..I can..completely relate...The same happened to me as well..

is that TRUE?

Thats beautiful.