Reviews for Fateful Room
Why must I be Omelette chapter 1 . 12/17/2002
Oh... I like it Joy. Good job. (I'm not a useful reviewer)

-from the person whose middle name is the same name as your first

(oooh... mysterious...)
Becbet chapter 1 . 12/9/2002
Hey Joy, 'tis me! I really like this. It's like you're drawn into the room with the sun and it's like you're almost cast out after reading the last line. Very effective.
kealohikakahiaka chapter 1 . 12/9/2002
I like the whole morning thing with the sun and stuff... Although in this poem I probably would've made the sun feminine.

I really like how when you read the poem your mind drifts off into the room, and then suddenly at the end, the whole thing just ties together.

Really cool.
elle ravenstarr chapter 1 . 12/9/2002
woah, really powerful and well written, she killed herself? dunno, hmm, its really um, well u read it and this peace washes over you and u dont see anything else, this is really good,

blessed be