|Reviews for Fateful Room|
| Why must I be Omelette chapter 1 . 12/17/2002
Oh... I like it Joy. Good job. (I'm not a useful reviewer)
-from the person whose middle name is the same name as your first
| Becbet chapter 1 . 12/9/2002
Hey Joy, 'tis me! I really like this. It's like you're drawn into the room with the sun and it's like you're almost cast out after reading the last line. Very effective.
| kealohikakahiaka chapter 1 . 12/9/2002
I like the whole morning thing with the sun and stuff... Although in this poem I probably would've made the sun feminine.
I really like how when you read the poem your mind drifts off into the room, and then suddenly at the end, the whole thing just ties together.
| elle ravenstarr chapter 1 . 12/9/2002
woah, really powerful and well written, she killed herself? dunno, hmm, its really um, well u read it and this peace washes over you and u dont see anything else, this is really good,