Reviews for Blind, Perfect
bridgitte chapter 1 . 3/23/2005
Bravo. this was magnificent. I enjoyed.
Dumon chapter 1 . 3/19/2004
He's Perfect and He'll never see. I really like this. you know how to describe poetry at it's best. this has to be one of the best poems I've ver read. Please R/R me when you get aq chance
waterlilypad chapter 1 . 5/19/2003
"What never lives

can never die,

he has wings

but cannot fly."

I felt captured the essence of this. I love this feeling, and hate it all the same and you convey that sense very well, but perhaps too loquacious?
til-iburnout aka Amanda Helton chapter 1 . 1/4/2003
This is wonderful my favorite lines were

'What never lives

can never die,

he has wings

but cannot fly.

Is there a heart

to reach his mind;

oh how could


be so blind?'

Well it's one of my favorite parts. The way you pharsed this poem is wonderful.
Nonentity chapter 1 . 12/9/2002
wow, incredible poem...loved the way you wrote it
Deana Bell chapter 1 . 12/9/2002
OMB this is seriously one of the best poems I've erad on ffn! Great job! It's both well written and has a good point.

-God loves you-