|Reviews for Death to the Yams|
| Kuradok Evangeline chapter 1 . 12/18/2007
I hate yams.
Lovely layout and very interesting dialogue.
Keep up the good work
| Sarah-Brighteyes chapter 1 . 6/6/2005
Hm reminds me of my home in some ways around the holidays. A very sweet peice, capturing the deliciousness of the meal and emotions wavering. You have a lovely way with poetry, sort of making me crave to read more.
P.S. I hate writing responses to my own reveiws in anothers reviews, but you didnt have an e-mail address I could respond to. The sky in my piece, Blind innocence, the rouged and flushed like a virgins first kiss, was to describe the colors of a sunset in comparison to a sunset, red against the blue. Anyways thank you for your comments I appreciated them.
| and flowers chapter 1 . 6/6/2005
? it comes off as a bit grotesque. would you agree with me?
| BlueRose218 chapter 1 . 6/5/2005
very disturbing...and now I'm feeling rather ill... you ended this really effectivly (I don't think I spelled that right)
| The Asian Banana chapter 1 . 5/22/2005
ignoring the carcasses among the silverware. This line very scary! LOLOLOLOLOLOL! I don't understand, but it is funny!
Check out my story with Chiquita-san! It is quit hot but not scary! Like this thing! LOLOLOLOLOL
| vonlan chapter 1 . 6/28/2004
i read it trying to understand it fully but it was kinda hard for me.
i've read this poem about 3 times before and now i finally see what you're talking about..slightly. hahaha.
| Kaliella chapter 1 . 5/17/2004
This is neat; it really gets the point across to the reader of how you feel about eating meat while not saying in any exact words what you are talking about. Very eloquent.
| distantdistorteddisturbed chapter 1 . 5/3/2004
Interesting topic. I find the flow and imagery very unique. Nice imagery.
| orangefreak33 chapter 1 . 10/31/2003
It's wonderful! There's so much imagery, and it gives the poem so many dimensions. The title almost reminds me of an Arrogant Worms song - "Carrot Juice is Murder". Check them out, they rock. And they're Canadian, and so am I!
| Jenny chapter 1 . 10/11/2003
I think this is the perfect blend of insanity and death... wonderful *applauds*
| kalmia raphael chapter 1 . 8/11/2003
*shudders* this is seriously good stuff. no real rhyming scheme you have there, but theres good flow... made me feel like someone was sitting in front of a fireplace, telling a story to kids... *coughs*
gotta adore free verse. who needs a set number of lines? *scoffs*
yes. humans celebrate Christmas with a feast by killing more creatures... somehow I thought of cannibalism reading this o_o
I'm sure there's more to this poem that I've managed to notice. Are these people so well provided for and should they try to share the wealth?
| stckyfootedtreefrog chapter 1 . 7/29/2003
Wow, that's interesting. Thanks for reviewing a bunch of my stories, I really apreciate it. Where'd the title come from? Very interesting... I don't think I'm going to be able to eat for a while, don't want anything gross to happen ;)
| FlyingPhish chapter 1 . 7/26/2003
whoa,that was splendid. At first I looked at your story thinking, hey, death to yams, interesting title. So I took a peek. The meaning is profound. I think I'm one of those people bloated at the table, often I find myself stuffing my face with yams. Boy do I love yams.
| Lover4Green chapter 1 . 7/14/2003
awesome poem! U teach my friend Rocket BOy (check his poems out!) how to write cuz he needs to improve but there good also keep it up!
| beautifuletdown chapter 1 . 7/13/2003
I could've sworn I'd reviewed this. Well, I love it. The flow and wording is excellent.