|Reviews for better off|
| wordpainter241 chapter 1 . 10/15/2003
He he, promised I'd review coherantly, so here is a semi-coherant review:
Dude, you are SO good enough.
But yeah, I feel hopelessly inadeuqate reading your poetry, so I guess I can relate.
| broken wings241 chapter 1 . 6/22/2003
Someone else said it.
I hate this emotion. Honestly, I understand how you feel, but I really despise it when guys (cuz its usually guys) go on about how they don't deserve chicks at shit like that. Most people who say they love you mean it.
Still, I hate it when you feel not good enough.
I'm sorry, this ism't really coherent, I've got mixed emotions about the emotions contained in this poem. I'll review properly at a later date.