|Reviews for The Ancient Pyramid|
| Laura R. Deliberto chapter 3 . 4/26/2003
Hey American Girl! I was just going through the search engine of this site lookin' for Egypt stories and this so caught my attention! You're an awesome writer! I couldn't stop reading this, it flows SO well! Just a minor historicle glitche (tut doesn't have a pyramid, he's buried in the Valley of the Kings), but otherwise, the story's fantastic and original! Most people when writing a time travel story don't go into this much depth. It's wonderful! Just, I did notice you haven't updated this story since Jan. Are you going to post another chappy? Please?
I love the characters too. They all have very rich personalities, and the banter between Bailey and Matt is terrific. Please write more!
On a last note, if you do have time, I'm currently working on an egypt story. "Fall in Pharaoh's Domain." Please read it if ya like!
| Restless-Spirit chapter 3 . 1/30/2003
Your ever famous cliffhangers! It's good to see em again. LoL That was an awesome chapter. I think it's so cute how Bailey and Matt like each other, but won't tell. I can't wait to read the next chapter! Catch ya later!
| Restless-Spirit chapter 2 . 1/29/2003
Aww hey! Shoutout! lol I feel loved. Sorry I didn't check this out sooner. School's a pain and it's only getting worse since it's midterms week. But since I've got a day off I decided I'd catch up on one of my fav authors! This is such an awesome chapter! Oooh I can't wait to read the next one! And thanks a bunch for the character list. It really helped. I see you have a new pen name. Cute! It took me a while to find, but that's okay. You're story's worth the wait. Action, adventure, and maybe romance, huh? If I had to grade this it's a definite A! I actually did write more for One Wild Ride. When I finish my last chem midterm tomorrow (thank God!) I'll send em to ya. Now it's onto the next chappie!
| NameChange chapter 3 . 1/18/2003
-; cliffhangers are eeeviiil. eeviil i tell you evil! o.O
eh _ nirfty chapter. teehee
| NameChange chapter 2 . 1/17/2003
_ indeed i am. o.O im slow at reviewing.. so dont mind me if im rather late XP
hehe! egypt! mwaha fun o.O
| aliveforever83 chapter 2 . 1/12/2003
ooopsisies! Don't think that last review went thru! Let's try this again! I couldn't review earlier cuz I was outta state helping my sister after her surgery. I'm back now tho!
Loving this chap! it's SO good...glad that ya did the character review..that helped refresh me. Was SO excited when I got on and saw that you'd updated...and TWICE! LoL
Yes, I'm posting my fics on my website, Infinite Love. kaotic_
that's the main page, just click on the Theatre Of Dreams' Fiction page. There's all the fics I'm working on, along with summaries and the status of them, be it finished, in progress or on hiatus. LoL Enjoy!
| aliveforever83 chapter 3 . 1/12/2003
LMAO DUCKBUMPS! hehe! sorry..something about that just struck my hehe bone!
...*SOB* you're just TOO good at these blasted cliffies! Really you are! *rubs hands together excitedly* ohhh I just can't WAIT to see what happens. and why is it adults automatically think ya're makin out? LoL Anyway. Good-oh story!
Just wanted to let you know that you've kinda been an inspiration in a way. I love my BSB fics, you know I do, but I want to one day write professionally...and seeing another BSB writer make the jump to Original gave me inspiration. Soo, I've started working on a story called for now, "Devil's Triangle". I've not gotten far yet, but I'll let you know when I post it if you want.
Looking forward to the next chapter~
| Penny Lane3 chapter 3 . 1/6/2003
Wow... things are now getting very interesting. Hehe. I can't wait for you to continue! I'm hoping for more of Bailey and Matt. They're cute together. ( Keep it up!
| Penny Lane3 chapter 2 . 1/2/2003
Ohh... awesome chapter. It's getting interesting. Hehe... I really love how you incorporate the legend Kaia. I can't wait to read more! I'd also like to see a few Bailey and Matt moments. I'm waiting for them, missy! ) Keep it up and update soon!
I wanted to thank you for promoting my story on your online diary. ) I'm starting on the next chapter, but I'm having a hard time trying to make everything work. I'll try and update soon. As for writing other stories, I am working on another original. However, I'm also obsessing over "Girlmore Girls" right now (Rory/Jess... Whoo!) so I might start a GG fanfic. Thank goodness for Winterbreak... lots of time for writing and reading.
Good job! I can't wait for the next chapter! )
| MyMy chapter 2 . 12/31/2002
awsome story I like it a lot
| Penny Lane3 chapter 1 . 12/31/2002
Hey! Great idea! And a great start! I can't wait to read what happens next. So far, I'd have to say Kiersten's my favorite character. She's so fiesty. Hehe. Keep it up!
| Restless-Spirit chapter 1 . 12/24/2002
Diva! You're back! YAY! Member me? The klutz who falls off the balcony? lol New pen name ;) Anyway, awesome story! It's kinda hard to follow with all the characters, but I'm gettin the hang of it. Rockin story! Can't wait to read the next chappie. Keep up the good work and update soon. KTBSPA!
| NameChange chapter 1 . 12/24/2002
_ this story is going good so far. good to be back on ur feet! YAY! ...something i really need to get around to doing -_-;
| aliveforever83 chapter 1 . 12/13/2002
WOW! It doesn't matter WHAT you write, you do it brilliantly! *grins* I've been waiting on this story for AGES! I've thought about doing an Egypt fic, Goddess knows I know enough about it. But, I loved it, and it sounds like it's gonna be SO awesome! Can't wait to read the next chap!
| Peachy Keen1 chapter 1 . 12/13/2002
This story sounds like it is going to be very good. Please keep writing it, I can't wait to see how they end up inside the cursed pyramid. Please hurry!