Reviews for Realm of The Four Moons: Chapter 1
InuFairy-Hanyou chapter 1 . 5/11/2005
Its really good, I like it though it needs more detail... sorry but its to short. But if you gave it more detail and stuff it would be even better!

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Tera McCaslin chapter 1 . 4/17/2005
Again, you should check your sentence structure.

Another thing, repetivity (if thats even a word) is VERY annoying. In tehe first paragraph, we know that you're talking about Senna the whole time. Just call her "she."

I have other advice, but it would take me much too long to type it. ~tera
Dragon Spirits chapter 1 . 6/5/2003
I like it! It's very nicely done and the part where Senna almost died gave me a bit of a shock.

Please update sometime soon! *Looks at publish date*
Midnight Kitty chapter 1 . 6/8/2002
First impression is a dragon made from bones. That can't be a good sign. But it seems a little late for second thoughts now. One prologue and one chapter reviewed. One to go.
T Spoon chapter 1 . 8/3/2000
Good job! I can't wait to read the rest!