i like this so much!
(of course it could be the fact that i love elves...or that your on my fav. authors list...or that i just plain like the story. im betting on the last reason. this paragrph had no point...)
anyways great story! WRITE MORE! NOW! OR ELSE! *aims arrow at u and bob.* heh heh heh heh heh... so write!

This is really, good you need to keep going, i want to read the rest! PLEASE keep on, it's really starting to get good!

i think it was good so far if u keep writing i may keep reading