Reviews for Fire and Ice
DiaRose chapter 1 . 11/11/2007
Hmm, a bit too repetetive for my taste, but I like it. It feels like reading the thoughts of a young girl. Lovely.


Akhenaten chapter 1 . 3/31/2005
good question... in a metaphorical way...
ApplesCM chapter 1 . 3/25/2005
You wrote this when you were in 7th grade? Its really good. You used the word ice alot in it, but I do believe it works. :)
Kenishiro chapter 1 . 10/2/2004
neat, how cool is that? how do you came up with that?nice!
Shy Violet Fae chapter 1 . 4/18/2004
It's a bit hard to read since it's in a straight line and it flows a little weirdly.
Roadside Dryer chapter 1 . 11/26/2003
Taka and Keichirou chapter 1 . 11/23/2003
one long sentence,...

its actually quite good...i've never seen it like this...different...nice

Indecisive chapter 1 . 11/16/2003
Great poem!
Angerona chapter 1 . 8/21/2003
hearts are made of fire ice

becuse the ice is logical heart

and the fire is the passion

great work

kinda short but creative non the less

~Angerona the Goddess of DEath~
XxFrozenFlamExX chapter 1 . 6/23/2003
Is that a sentence or a poem? Come on, make it more longer and descriptive!
Anon chapter 1 . 6/19/2003
Completly understandable poem. Written with such enthusiasm. U r a great writter! Keep writing b/c I can't wait to read more of what u make! And I am really sorry! You know who this is! When u find out come get me online or in person sometime!
Killer Fang chapter 1 . 6/13/2003
Your poem is kind of confusing and I don't really understand it unless u r saying that your heart is buring but hard as ice! I need some explanation! Pleadse don't take this offensivley!
LittleMaggie chapter 1 . 1/28/2003
The layout was a bit skewed, but the poem itself is really good. It's not the best i've seen here, but it's definetaly HEADS above most of the garbage on here.

Good poem :-)
Kat Hawkins chapter 1 . 1/12/2003
come on, people. i'm not THAT bad a writer, am i?
AaZz chapter 1 . 12/13/2002