wow that was intense, nice story, a too much complicated life...

this was a great read. loved your characters and style of writing. keep it up :]

I always liked Jane...

Absolutely fantastic end, I'm feeling good now.

Cheers.

Ey! I couldn't believe it when I saw the email. I put this story en my story alert list a long time ago, keeping my hopes up to read the end, well, maybe this time has come.

A week ago I remembered a fact from this story, but I still can't believe I'm reviewing a new chapter.

Other things, I always liked a lot Amanda, and I was hoping that Aleck was with her forever, but right now, I don't see it, is just, I don't like Jane, even if I can't remember why, 3 o 4 years are quite a lot for my memory.

So please, let us know the end of this story and thanks.

I like this story, alot. It's been like 5 years since you updated? But we can all keep hoping for another update? *crosses fingers*

Alright, this is a great fic. I really like it so far.

But not all people who buy things from American Eagle are pricks or bitches, by the way (and I feel like such a hippocrite because I feel the need for objecting to that right now, but hear me out). It just means you have a bit of money to spend. I'm only objecting because it composes the great majority of my wardrobe.

But I am not your stereotypical person in general: I play trumpet in multiple school bands, I love playing Magic the Gathering (hence my nickname), I've played and enjoyed Dungeons and Dragons, my favorite boardgame is chess, and I love Lord of the Rings, Anime, Fantasy, and Science Fiction; but I also love Football, Baseball, Basketball and Soccer (when I'm playing, or when I'm watching British club games (for soccer), can't stand watching either any other way).

My best friend is also my D&D buddy, and yet I've had a few girlfriends before, and they were all relatively attractive (in my opinion).

I love heavy metal: Avenged Sevenfold, Metallica, Drowning Pool, Slayer, Queensryche, Black Sabbath, Judas Priest, Power Glove, etc. RAP is CRAP! Except Run DMC and Grandmaster Flash, old school stuff from back in the 80's.

My favorite color is Red, followed closely by Black.

And I've written a huge message on a site generally not publicly visited by preps, despite the fact that I look like one.

Don't be quick to jump to stereotypes, is all I'm saying. I'm like fifty different contradictions all rolled up into one person.

The best part is, you don't even know yet whether I'm a boy or a girl who just practically explained her/himself to you.

Wow, I've had a pretty unnecessary rant here, haven't I?

Great story; please don't stereotype.

PS: My gender is... male. I know. I'm such a pervert that I'm reading this story about lesbians. You know, the sad thing is, this was on the first page when I typed 'lesbians' into 'search'. I know. Pathetic, ain't it?

I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed this. Really.

I'll admit I found it searching for lesbian erotica to while away the hours.

But it wasn't and I didn't mind, even when I realised it wasn't going to be I kept going.

Your characterisation is beautiful. There's such intent belief in your characters and I fell apart with them.

However...How can we love Morgan with Aleck when we aren't given enough time with her? We never see how much Aleck loves her till after she's gone. Is this deliberate?

Personally I find the reunion of old lovers a bit trite but it works, it works so well.

Well done.

The most amazing piece of fanfiction I've ever read...

This is such an amazing story that I have trouble putting my thoughts on it into words. This is just...outstanding. Each chapter continues to render me speechless.

This is honestly an amazing series. I like how Aleck acts so confused but sure of herself, it makes her seem so real, like someone you could meet on the street. The thing that cativates me is how realistic this series is; a lot of stories are way too happy to be true. But this has a little sugar and spice :)

Keep it up.

this is an excellent story, it keeps you guessing, it gets you angry, it gets you sad, it gets you excited for more of whats going to happen. i need to know what happens after this, i am in complete shock to see that you didn't finish. i think on my behalf and everyones behalf that have read this and are waiting for an update, you should continue.

This I have to say is one of my, honestly, favorites. I love the story line, but really want to know what else happens.

yay

This is an outstanding story you've written so far. You have one more reviewer held captive. Update ASAP )

*applauds* That was a wonderful story. I loved how the artwork changed with Aleck, how there were so many people still in love with her at one time, the short trysts, the drinking!, the smoking, the funny quips and the hardships. The deaths and losses, and most of all the complicated relationships. She is a lot like me. I don't really think that I'll ever settle down with one person, because for one thing I have serious trust issues and for another thing, I NEED the perfect person. for one reason or another. I know I'm young, but it just fits, you know? but yeah. get this published. this is great, it'll be the fastest novel-made-movie you ever saw... thanks for a great novel. i loved it. keep writing.