that's pretty good...i like the child's POV

Very interesting. I liked the creative format of this short story. It flowed well, everything fit. Good message. Keep writing!

Wow. That was one of those stories that makes you think about your own problems a little differently. It was really good.

This is really, really good. I've never thought of it that way.

It's also sad. *sniffle sniffle*

~God bless~

Thanks for your review _

Aww, poor kid :( This was an interesting take, I liked it.

I'm not sure why, but for some reason I really like that story. Good job

That's very sad, but I can relate to that on a certain level.

amazing

and so true...pain in the eyes of a child who knows so little and yet understands more than is thought