Ohh Exciting :)

I'm surprised she wasn't followed by Juan on her adventure around the island. He sounds like a very sweet guy - almost like a puppy

NO! You can't end it here! Zane and Maria need to get together and have cute little Merbabies! Where have you been for the last seven years? Don't kill the story! If you want to message me, I'm under this name on . Don't let this story stay on Hiatus!

I love your story! It's romantic, captivating and very exciting. I can't wait to find out what happens at the end. I also love your writing style and your vivid descriptions. They put such clear images in my head that I can almost imagine the scenes unfolding before my eyes. Thanks for making me feel happy, sad, frightened with your wonderful writing and I really hope you can come back to finish up this story with a flourish! I am looking forward to it!

great job i hope maria can stop the war or helpthe merfolks

i hope to see the nexts one soon keep it up

I still cannot believe you have not updated since 2004! This story has been one of my favorites and I'm deeply saddened you've discontniued it. I hope you pick it up again and finish it. Haha. D You broke my heart when Zane left Maria.

~Syn

P.S. Funny thing, my name is Maria too!

OMG! I love your story so much! I really think that you should finish what you started because the story is good enough if not very long. I really want to know how this ends! How Maria and Zane turn out.

So please keep writing this if you read this review!

Hello Lemon,

I love your story which the merman falling for the lady than the other way around which is the captivating part of it. I do notice they're isn't a lot of scenes with just them and usually I have to speed read the other bits. I haven't completely know what Zane is like because the spotlight on him is either not there or too short but it may just be me. Anyway, keep writing. I have yet to finish reading the last few chapters. Maybe I'll get my wish and I'll know more about Zane? xD

OMFG! This story rocks, come on UPDATE! This story NEEDS to contiue, i don't understand why you stoped, Zane just left her, she is about the answers she needs, to help Zane, and what the F*, why couldn't she llike turn in to a mermaid after the information was give or something? ... sorry i really like this story and it just upsets me that you have stopped for two years, i mean i have ideas if you want to hear mine and get something off of mine i wouldn't care, i just want this story to contiue, because your one of the three or four people who update more chapter and your grammer is kicking, you have detail in your story. Everyone else just doesn't update becuase they didn't get a whole bunch of review the first day of posting up there stories.

I know i shouldn't be rambling off like this on you, but i want you look at the number of reviews you have, and the rest that don't even mach your, your story rocks and you should contiue it, and besides you said,"I'll keep on even if it kills me..." or something like that.

But really don't let this story go to waste. Its worth finishing even if you see no hope for it.

Death-dealer

Yes I know I haven't read very far but I really like what I have read so far. I find it ironic that the main character girl in your story is named Maria. In my merman story the main human girl character's name is Marie. I found this story two days ago when I was looking at one of the authors that had reviewed my merman story. She had you on her list of faves so I decided to have a read. Love it!

Keep up the good work and I'll review more when I get to more reading. I hope you'll read my stories sometime too. My merman one is Shores of an Ocean Fantasy.

Cya!

I love your story it's vry interesting! .

Please update soon

It's one of a kind!

I absolutly LOVE your story. I read it all in one day...but was disapointed to find it unfinished and un-updated for years. I was just wondering if you were going to ever finish it? I know it will drive me crazy not knowing what happens. I love your chracters, they are all vibrant and unique, not to mention I love the angst as well.

I surly hope that Zane didn't mean what he said to Maria and that he only did it to protect her. I know he loves her, _.

I am a big fan of mer stories and have even written my own (though mine hardly rivaled your in length _ ) and this one is definatly at the top of my list. You display creativity and drag me into a world I am entranced by. Please update.

OMG I love this story. its such a beautiful well done story that if you fix it up a bit more i would think this can be good as a story book. well, either way please update soon i wanna know what happens next. i was thinking that soon enough when some thing happens either zane or maria make a wish from that lamp thing to be change to a mermaid. it would be a cute ending. as maria has nothing left on the island, well there is peter. but stil,you must update this story. you had at least 2 years to think what u wanted to do. so UPDATE SON!

Ja-Ne _

AWSOME! but i can't believethat Zane did that!

Ja-Ne _

This chapter is awsome. keep it up!

Ja-Ne _

darn! the good party just begun! How can a human and a merfolk be together? i mean, is there a spell that gives Maria a "fin"? Kep updating!