Reviews for going away song
ossining chapter 1 . 6/29/2006
Beautiful. It is so true, and the way you expressed it was perfection. Keep writing! :)
Mistress Jakira chapter 1 . 2/7/2003
I love it! Such beautiful poetry you've created lately. I've so considered these things before, too, I can't believe I'm not the only one. XD I adore the whole thing. If I had to pick a favorite part, though, I'd probably choose "...Would you be / Offended by love you created in me" because that's just what people are afraid of in confessing their feelings. It's worded immaculately. And it rhymes, too-I love rhymes. _ I'm adding this to my favorites, I think-excellent material! ~MJ
account inactive00000 chapter 1 . 12/22/2002
ah wow.

completely poignant and personal. i do like this. yes, ah, the rhyme is very nice. this is a beautiful poem, i can quite relate

marlena